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the relationship between the guruji and the young boy must be more clear?this seems general. like what exactly were the childs confusions. show me the scene in which the guruji helps him? does the child feel convinced, why?

i liked the earlier bit where the child likes what he sees of the gurji- his hair, his artistic look. here too, you must tell clearly, from this childs pointof view- how he feels guided.

also, you say there are different streams in art- but by telling us he goes to j.j, you do not tell us which stream he chooses and why?