Talk:Next Page 3

the first part of this page is cheating, priyam! you cannot say 'fantasy' and just leave it there. what does the world of fantasy mean to us? why is it wonderful? what special secrets about it do children know, that adults forget? you must tell something, not keep it all to yourself. and put in pictures, differnt pictures, that could explore differenent kinds of fantasies. There is a group of children mentioned in the story, with their worlds of fantasies, that is really rich. i cannot imagine, what a mad diverse world that must be. you must tell me some of it, you must put some images that suggest it.

'think' of fantasy- what does it mean to children? what do you want to say about it? what did it mean in the little dhurinder's life. now write this into the first paragraph on this page.

then, when you have done a rich first part of the page, go onto guruji, and you might find, your images and writing about him might also go further. the image of the big hand and little hand is nice. the word 'artist' coming int along with the text of how he looked and how he appealed to the child, is nice too.

the images - or the words you stick on are great when you do them like this- when they add to what the words are saying.