Mooshak ki kahani. Kamal Swaroop

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Dark room Dhundiraj darwaza band karata hai.mome batti phook ker bhujhata hai.sirf lalten ki lal roshni.aik chuha pighalti batti mome chaat raha tha.tashtari ke rasayano mein aik tasveer ubharti tair rahi thi Achanak,kamala dhadam se kamre mein darwaza dhakel ker ghusi.vh dar ke mare cheekh rahi thi. Kamala-----ab mein yahan nahi rahungi Tashtari ke jal mein panditji ka sher mein badalta chitre kaala hua,dhundhiraj krodhit hua.kamala ko apne se alag kiya khatkhataya kyon nahin?yehi to aik proof tha.kya jawab doonga ab scientific sabha mein?ki meri patni ne be mauka dark room mein ghus ker proof mita diya.kahan dhoondu panditji ko

dono mein ruthna or manana,sulah

dhundiraj ne darwazeke chote se chaidh se bheeter dekha.momebatti pighli hui thi.chuha ja chukka tha .theek momebatti ke neeche table per sone ki bareek chadhiyan ke do gahtter the. chamak seedhe dhundiraj ki ankho se takraee. usne sone ki pin ko momebtti ki lo mein pighla ker dekha sona khara utra. Dhundiraj ghar se bahar nikla,main jaldi aata hoon. Dhundiraj ke haatho mein bahut sari khareedari thi. per ghar aaya to dekha kamala pagla rahi thi. jalti hui lakdi liye jahan tahan bane chuhon ke billon ke munh mein aag bhar rahi thi.dhundi ne kamala ko sambhala jalti lakdi ghar ke bahar phainki. "hosh mein aao kamala"

"main tang aagayi hun tum chale jate ho to yeh ghar bhoot ki tarah……"

dhundiraj ne darkroom ka darwaza khola ,ander koi nahin tha.

"tumhari mem ka aadmi aaya tha kitabon ki pooch raha tha".

darkroom. raat ko vahi choohon ki kit kit , dhundi utha ,darkroom ke ched se jhanka.chooha pighalti mom chaat raha tha.phir tashtari mein rakha chandi ki bhasm ka mishran laplapati jeebh se chaata, phir jam ker saans leta or thoda phoolta. moonche naak ke neeche ugati jadon ki or se sunhari hoti. sunaharapan dheere dheere mooch ki or badhne laga.iske saath mooche bhi badhne lagati.tatpaschyat , kisi pencil ki lead ki tarah tootker aik gather mein badli.

Dhundirajne dwar khola,peeth per band kiya.dekhne laga.chooha dara nahin.mome chati. nitrate pee. moochki noke se pighal ker sona tapak ker ganpati ki moorti mein dhalne laga.chooha table faand kerdhundiraj ke kandhe per gilhari kee tarah chadh ker baith gaya mooshk ne moorti adhbut gadi thi.

DHUNDIRAJ prathkal utha. balti se nahata , purush sutre padh raha tha. kamala pooja ghar gai to vahan ganpati ki sone ki sunder si moorti saja ker rakhi thi.chakit hui.

ye kya tum laye ho?

kya


ganpati

sunder hai?

maine soncha jab tum akeli hoti ho tumhari raksha karega.

abki bar main sath chalungi

dhundiraj chala gaya.kamla ne apni bacche ko dekha. munh se lar tapak rahi thi. ghabrai.

MARKET Nathdvara mandir ki painting ke samne baith ker bhagat patni pati ne photo kichvaaya tha. usiko sone ke rango se dhundiraj ne ranga tha.johari parivar dekh ker prasn ho utha.baki bhi aise chitron ki mang karne lage.

Johari-----------aap hai unche karigar

ye to aap kah rahen hain baki shahar to mujhe nikalne per tula hai.

dhamkiyon se kya hota hai? ishvar ne chaha to aik din aapko khoob yash milega.


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