Talk:Translation into english of story. by gowri patwardhan

dear suyog, your story is dense and beautiful to me. i am not sure how to give suggestions, but we have uploaded binod bihari mishra's description of how he grew blind, and how he lived with blindness. he was a famous painter by then already. he writes very clearly about his situation. maybe you would like to read it. of course he went permanantly blind, and the point of your story is also the shifting of experience- the non solidity of what we feel and even of what we think is happening to us? i shall email it seperately to you.

sorry for the very late response- i have excuses but inadequate ones.

do work on making this a work which you feel has reached its fruition and that can be put aside, to venture onto new things?

a writer from baroda commented on the story too- i am going to post some of her comments also here. hansa