Talk:Next Page 2
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Revision as of 00:19, 10 July 2006 by HansaThapliyal (talk)
surakshit is a truly wonderful image, the image and the word combined, they express very well what your story is about at that point.
the second part of the page needs work to come to life. i think maybe you feel it is a in between stage- he is surakshit and he is beginning to talk of fantasy, so what should you put here? his mother is encouraging- think , i will also try to. but the second part of the page has to come to life
