Difference between revisions of "File talk:Pr2.jpg"

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the first part of this page is super, super. the surakshit and that image.  
 
the first part of this page is super, super. the surakshit and that image.  
 
i really really like it.  
 
i really really like it.  
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the second part does not come to life-
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but i also think the two things- the word surakshit and the image of the child and the older hand, expresses all that is in the page- it tells you about the guru and the mother, and both their relationships with the child-
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therefore the second part of the page, looks dull.
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one solution might be to increase what is written in the page.
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or, now that you have mentioned fantasy, to start pictorially entering the world of fantasy.

Latest revision as of 00:47, 10 July 2006

the first part of this page is super, super. the surakshit and that image. i really really like it. but i also think the two things- the word surakshit and the image of the child and the older hand, expresses all that is in the page- it tells you about the guru and the mother, and both their relationships with the child- therefore the second part of the page, looks dull.

one solution might be to increase what is written in the page. or, now that you have mentioned fantasy, to start pictorially entering the world of fantasy.