https://wiki.phalkefactory.net/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3ANext_Page_2 2026-10-17T07:57:14Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.31.12 https://wiki.phalkefactory.net/index.php?title=Talk:Next_Page_2&diff=5908&oldid=prev 2006-07-09T19:28:29Z

<p></p> <table class="diff diff-contentalign-left" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;">←Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;">Revision as of 19:28, 9 July 2006</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1" >Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">surakshit is a truly wonderful image, the image and the word combined, they express very well what your story is about at that point.</del></div></td><td colspan="2">&#160;</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>&#160;</td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"></td><td class='diff-marker'>&#160;</td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>the <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">second </del>part of the <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">page needs work to come to life</del>. i think <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">maybe you feel it is a in between stage</del>- <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">he is </del>surakshit and <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">he is beginning to talk </del>of <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">fantasy</del>, <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">so what should </del>you <del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">put here? 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HansaThapliyal https://wiki.phalkefactory.net/index.php?title=Talk:Next_Page_2&diff=5907&oldid=prev 2006-07-09T18:49:27Z

<p></p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>surakshit is a truly wonderful image, the image and the word combined, they express very well what your story is about at that point.<br /> <br /> the second part of the page needs work to come to life. i think maybe you feel it is a in between stage- he is surakshit and he is beginning to talk of fantasy, so what should you put here? his mother is encouraging- think , i will also try to. but the second part of the page has to come to life</div>

HansaThapliyal