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and you have pro geny, people you have spent hours with and shared pieces of things you learned, and looked into their eyes and watched them listen and spoken when those pupils moved back as if to ask you to speak..

You knew they'd imitate.. imitation also happens by osmosis? but gestures, phrases and a manner..
some of them will be cinema demagogues and will imitate you thus for a long secluded while
some will be cinema writers and will hear your voice when they are writing
they will quibble with each other, seeing how the other imitates a recognizable aspect, a reduced one, of you

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 You knew they'd imitate..
-the beginning imitations will be the early drafts, noisy, all over the place, with a thin almost unhearable thread of beauty most times but mostly
+the beginning imitations will be the early drafts, noisy, all over the place, with a  almost unhear- able thin thread of beauty most times but for the rest
 the heavy opinion, the wanting to make statements, the pose, in the language and the image.
 let there be noise?
 you will recognize something of yourself in both- the beauty and the pose.. it must happen? that is the process? these fragments of yourself, pieces merely, floating about.. what will come of that? 'i have only some of the parent tree and so i must make noise to be heard.'
-through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty, the kind that will shatter- your glasses?  and crack the boardroom table, molt mushrooms out of what looked like rust.. and make you laugh with a real pleasure
+through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful you helped to tap at will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty

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 You knew they'd imitate..
-the beginning imitations will be the early drafts, noisy, all over the place, with a thread of beauty most times and with plenty of ugly imitation otherwise..
+the beginning imitations will be the early drafts, noisy, all over the place, with a thin almost unhearable thread of beauty most times but mostly
 the heavy opinion, the wanting to make statements, the pose, in the language and the image.
 let there be noise?
-you will recognize something of yourself in both- the beauty and the pose.. it must happen? that is the process? these fragments of yourself, pieces merely, floating about.. what will come of that? only some of the parent tree and so i must make noise to be heard.
+you will recognize something of yourself in both- the beauty and the pose.. it must happen? that is the process? these fragments of yourself, pieces merely, floating about.. what will come of that? 'i have only some of the parent tree and so i must make noise to be heard.'
-through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty, the kind that will shatter- your glasses?  and crack the boardroom table, molt mushrooms out of what looked like rust.. and generate laughter?
+through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty, the kind that will shatter- your glasses?  and crack the boardroom table, molt mushrooms out of what looked like rust.. and make you laugh with a real pleasure

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-and you have pro geny, younger people you have spent hours with and shared pieces of things you learned, and looked into their eyes and watched them listen and watched them talk and spoken when those pupils moved back as if to ask you to speak at this precise juncture
+and you have pro geny, younger people you have spent hours with and shared pieces of things you learned, and looked into their eyes and watched them listen and watched them talk and spoken when those pupils moved back as if to ask you to speak at that precise juncture
-You knew they'd imitate.. imitation also happens by osmosis? but gestures, phrases and a manner..
+You knew they'd imitate..
 the beginning imitations will be the early drafts, noisy, all over the place, with a thread of beauty most times and with plenty of ugly imitation otherwise..
 the heavy opinion, the wanting to make statements, the pose, in the language and the image.
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 you will recognize something of yourself in both- the beauty and the pose.. it must happen? that is the process? these fragments of yourself, pieces merely, floating about.. what will come of that? only some of the parent tree and so i must make noise to be heard.
-through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty, the kind that will shatter- your glasses?  and crack the boardroom table, moult mushrooms
+through the first draft of the excess, the overdone image, the overstated opinion, if you can trust that because it is your progeny- no, because they are human, something beautiful will persist and grow in the manure of that excess into an art i ficial beauty, the kind that will shatter- your glasses?  and crack the boardroom table, molt mushrooms out of what looked like rust.. and generate laughter?